What are the disadvantages and advantages to couples having no children?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well firstly, the advantages that I think can spend time for myself or themselves, we can make a lot of memories too. In my personal opinion, if I have my own children, I can\'t save energy for me. Like when I was day off, I need to hang out with them. In other case, the disadvantage which you don\'t know the pleasure of growing up your children. I\'m not pretty sure because I don\'t have my own children. So what do you say?
강사 첨삭
Fantastic Tuesday, Elic! Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Have faith in yourself because I have faith in you. Good luck to you. Everything seems impossible until it is done.
Well firstly, the advantages that I think can spend time for myself or themselves, we can make a lot of memories too.
>>> Well, firstly, the advantages that I think are that I can spend time for myself or others, and we can make a lot of memories too.
In my personal opinion, if I have my own children, I can\'t save energy for me.
>>> In my personal opinion, if I have my own children, I can\'t save energy for myself.
Like when I was day off, I need to hang out with them.
>>> For example, during my day off, I needed to hang out with them.
In other case, the disadvantage which you don\'t know the pleasure of growing up your children.
>>> In other cases, the disadvantage is that you don\'t know the pleasure of rai[이름]g your children.
I\'m not pretty sure because I don\'t have my own children.
>>> CORRECT.
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