What are the disadvantages of being old and you are working in company?
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Dear [Name],
When it is getting older, my eyes is getting worse. So I can not read small character. So I have to change my glassese when I want to see it.
It is very inconvenience problem.
In my case, I can use computer and mobilphone well. But a old people don\'t use them. As you know, all documents and reports are made to electric files.
So we have to use these instruments well.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]
It is very inconvenience problem.
In my case, I can use computer and mobilphone well. But a old people don\'t use them. As you know, all documents and reports are made to electric files.
So we have to use these instruments well.
I hope you had a good day today. See you in our class ^^
Dear [Name],
When it is getting older, my eyes is getting worse. So I can not read small character. So I have to change my glassese when I want to see it.
When it is getting older, my eyes is getting worse. So I can not read small character. So I have to change my glassese when I want to see it.
>> When I am getting older, my eyes is getting worse. So I cannot read small characters, letter or words so I have to change my eyeglasses when I want to read something.
It is very inconvenience problem.
>> This problem is very inconvenient.
In my case, I can use computer and mobilphone well. But a old people don\'t use them. As you know, all documents and reports are made to electric files.
>> In my case, I can use a computer and mobile phone well but old people don\'t use them. As you know, all documents and reports are made and are in a drive or a file.
So we have to use these instruments well.
>> CORRECT
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