What are the disadvantages of living in the city?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hello there!
The snow fell yesterday,But the rain fell today.
The temperature drops these day.
I like spring best because i met girlfriend in spring.
Homework: What are the disadvantages of living in the city?
City resident can\'t feel the beauties of nature. It\'s easy to become a prosaic person.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tony! I also want to experience snow one day. A typhoon is currently in my country right now so it\'s also raining heavily. It is also accompanied by a strong wind. Always be safe!
You made me happy when you wrote about your favorite season.
The snow fell yesterday,But the rain fell today.
The temperature drops these day.
>>The temperature drops this day.
I like spring best because i met girlfriend in spring.
>>I like spring best because I met my girlfriend in spring.
City resident can\'t feel the beauties of nature.
See you in class tomorrow! :)
~Teacher Sheila ^_^
The snow fell yesterday,But the rain fell today.
>>It was snowing yesterday but it\'s raining today.
The temperature drops these day.
>>The temperature drops this day.
OR>>the temperature is dropping these days.
I like spring best because i met girlfriend in spring.
>>I like spring best because I met my girlfriend in spring.
OR>>My favorite is spring because I met my girlfriend in spring.
City resident can\'t feel the beauties of nature.
>>City residents can\'t feel the beauties of nature.
OR>>The residents in the city can\'t experience the beauty of nature.
It\'s easy to become a prosaic person.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It\'s easy to become a dull person.
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