What are the disadvantages of staying over?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think we have a few disadvantages for staying over.
First, when we go to another house, we need to take our stuff.
It\'s heavy to take our stuff, and we might have left our stuff at home.
Second, it is uncomfortable to stay over.
There might be other people in another house. If there\'s a lot of people,
we might feel uncomfortable.
Those are disadvantages for staying over. There is a few disadvantages of staying over, but I like to stay over because we can have fun!!
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What are the disadvantages of staying over?
I think we have a few disadvantages for staying over.
>>> CORRECT
First, when we go to another house, we need to take our stuff.
>>> CORRECT
It\'s heavy to take our stuff, and we might have left our stuff at home.
>>> It\'s heavy to take our stuff, and we might have left other stuff back home.
Second, it is uncomfortable to stay over.
>>> CORRECT
There might be other people in another house.
>>> There might be other people in the house where you\'re staying over.
If there\'s a lot of people, we might feel uncomfortable.
>>> CORRECT
Those are disadvantages for staying over.
>>> CORRECT
There is a few disadvantages of staying over, but I like to stay over because we can have fun!
>>> There are a few disadvantages of staying over, but I like to stay over because we can have fun!
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