What are the disadvantages of technology?

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Of course, there are many disadvantages but I think environment pollution. 

>> Of course, there are many disadvantages but I think environment pollution is the worst. 

The reason I choose it is I felt the fact in my skin these days. 

>>The reason I said this is I feet this fact on my skin these days. 

In morning and night, it is cold but In the afternoon, it is so hot.

>> In the morning and night, it is cold, but in the afternoon, it is very hot.