What are the dramas you wouldn\'t recommend others to watch? Why?

2024-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

학생이 쓴 원문

I wouldn\'t recommend magic dramas or adult-only dramas. Actually, magic dramas are interesting, but God doesn\'t like them. Jehovah hates people who practice black magic and white magic, so I think I should follow His will. Also, adult-only dramas should be watched by people who are over 19 years old. They contain a lot of bad scenes. For example, there are many fighting scenes, nudity, or criminal killing scenes. These scenes are shocking even to adults. Therefore, I think everyone should avoid these types of dramas.

강사 첨삭

Hi, MK!

I see! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this question. I completely understand that sometimes watching these dramas can influence others, so it\'s not very ideal to watch them.

- T. Caitlyn

I wouldn\'t recommend magic dramas or adult-only dramas.

>> CORRECT
Actually, magic dramas are interesting, but God doesn\'t like them.

>> CORRECT
Jehovah hates people who practice black magic and white magic, so I think I should follow His will.

>> CORRECT
Also, adult-only dramas should be watched by people who are over 19 years old.

>> CORRECT
They contain a lot of bad scenes.

>> CORRECT
For example, there are many fighting scenes, nudity, or criminal killing scenes.

>> They contain a lot of graphic scenes, such as fighting, nudity, or criminal acts.
These scenes are shocking even to adults.

>> CORRECT
Therefore, I think everyone should avoid these types of dramas.

>> Therefore, I believe everyone should avoid these types of dramas.

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