What are the effects of getting angry?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hi there~
Happy Monday! Merry Christmas!
I wish marry my girlfriend as soon as possible.
Homework: What are the effects of getting angry?
It\'s relieve stress. A tense situation, angry is good expression. But don\'t get angry on the slightest provocation.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! You are such a positive person. You always surprise me with your answers. Keep it up!
Until the next one! See you in class!
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>I wish to marry my girlfriend as soon as possible.
It\'s relieve stress.
>>It relieves stress.
A tense situation, angry is good expression.
>>A tense situation, anger is a good expression.
But don\'t get angry on the slightest provocation.
>>But, don\'t get angry at the slightest provocation.
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