What are the effects of global warning?
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There are a lot of the effects [이름]ce the global warning started such as the disasters, ri[이름]g surface of the sea, ri[이름]g temperature of the sea, and the air pollution. You know? an earthquake was not common in Korea before. But [이름]ce it started for the global warning. Except for that, Tsunami, hurricane something like this. It begins common
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There are a lot of the effects [이름]ce the global warning started such as the disasters, ri[이름]g surface of the sea, ri[이름]g temperature of the sea, and the air pollution.
>>> There have been a lot of effects [이름]ce the global warning started, such as disasters, ri[이름]g sea surface temperatures, and air pollution.
You know? an earthquake was not common in Korea before.
>>> You know? An earthquake was not common in Korea before.
But [이름]ce it started for the global warning.
>>> But it started with global warming.
Except for that, Tsunami, hurricane something like this. It begins common
>>> Except for that, a tsunami, a hurricane, or something like this It begins with common.
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