What are the five most important things you should take on a business trip?
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The first important thing is checking my schedules and time planing. Because l should finish my tasks in a few days.
The second thing is physical fitness management. In my case, when I go on business trip, I drive for a long time and stop by more than 2 cities which have long distance. So for safe driving, I tend to get some rest before going on biz-trip.
And It’s very important to pack well for I don’t spend unnecessary money to buy something.
Also I should secure the enough laptop storage, because I have to save big data in my laptop.
Lastly I take some snacks like chocolate, gum avoid sleep for my long distance driving.
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleThe first important thing is checking my schedules and time planing.
>> The first important thing is to check my schedules and plan the time.
Because l should finish my tasks in a few days.
>> That\'s because l should finish my tasks in a few days.
The second thing is physical fitness management.
>> That\'s because l should finish my tasks in a few days.
The second thing is physical fitness management.
>> CORRECT!
In my case, when I go on business trip, I drive for a long time and stop by more than 2 cities which have long distance.
>> In my case, when I go on business trip, I drive for a long time and stop by more than 2 cities which have a long distance.
So for safe driving, I tend to get some rest before going on biz-trip.
>> CORRECT!
And It’s very important to pack well for I don’t spend unnecessary money to buy something.
> And it’s very important to pack well so I wouldn’t spend unnecessary money to buy something.
Also I should secure the enough laptop storage, because I have to save big data in my laptop.
>> Also, I should secure enough laptop storage, because I have to save big data in my laptop.
Lastly I take some snacks like chocolate, gum avoid sleep for my long distance driving.
>> CORRECT!
And It’s very important to pack well for I don’t spend unnecessary money to buy something.
> And it’s very important to pack well so I wouldn’t spend unnecessary money to buy something.
Also I should secure the enough laptop storage, because I have to save big data in my laptop.
>> Also, I should secure enough laptop storage, because I have to save big data in my laptop.
Lastly I take some snacks like chocolate, gum avoid sleep for my long distance driving.
>> Lastly, I should take some snacks like chocolate, or gums to avoid sleepin on my long distance driving.
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