What are the good and bad things about being a celebrity?
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Many celebrities have wealth, honor and even popularity.
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They can get many things more than general people.
>> They can get many things more than common people.
For example, BTS earned about 57 million dollars during last year.
>>For example, BTS earned about 57 million dollars last year.
Also, They are receiving big love of fans in the world.
>> Also, they are receiving big love of fans around the world.
And even, they were awarded a medal of culture from president Moon in 2018.
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Like this, many celebrities are living a glittering life.
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However, if there is a light, there is also a shadow.
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They can have a difficult to live without private life because they are already known to many people.
>>They can have a difficult life to live without private life because they are already known to many people.
Because public people have a curious about them, celebrities can always be a gossip.
>> Because public people have a curiosity about them, celebrities can always be the center of a gossip.
For example, Bill Gates was in a new how much he was spent for his vacation.
>> For example, Bill Gates was in a news on how much he has spent for his vacation.
Also, recently, it became big problem that many famous people were exposed about malicious comments and even some of them suicided.
>>Also, recently, it became big problem that many famous people were exposed about malicious comments and even some of them committed suicide.
Nevertheless, I think they should take some amount of inconvenient from exposure to media because they are getting other things thanks to that.
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It is hard to get everything!
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