What are the good and worst things about winter?
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강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Lucy
It is happy thing to have clear four seasons.
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Thanks to four seasons, we can see and experience various things like snow, maple.
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>>Thanks to four seasons, we can see and experience various things like snow and maple.
We can do all which are possible only in each season for a year because we have four seasons.
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Especially, the reason why I wait for coming winter is that we can eat delicious desserts like Hotteok, Bungeoppang, and Hobbang.
>>Especially, the reason why I wait for the coming winter is that we can eat delicious desserts like Hotteok, Bungeoppang, and Hobbang.
We can eat in other seasons, but it is more delicious when it is very cold weather.
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Also, winter is the season which Gamgyul are produced.
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It is a type of orange similar to the mandarin orange or tangerine and also my favorite fruit.
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Thus, I like winter.
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However, winter is too dry.
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It is worst for our skin and my skin is already dry type.
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So, I should pay attention more to care for my skin.
>> So, I should pay more attention to take care for my skin.
Also, I should drink a lot of water because my throat is also dry.
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Thus, I think I need to care for something more in winter than other seasons.
>> Thus, I think I need to take care more in winter than other seasons.
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