What are the harmful and the beneficial effects of advertising?
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Advertising can annoy people especially when it hinders to see other things like article, videos and TV programs. So people eventually might not like that product advertised if it bothers them too much. Also, some advertising can make people overate the product, which may not be helpful in judging the product appropriately. For beneficial effects, advertising gives consumers information about specific product and supplier can sell more products.
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Advertising can annoy people especially when it hinders to see other things like article, videos and TV programs.
>> Correct!
OR: Advertising can irritate people, especially when it interferes with the ability to view other things such as articles, videos, and television programs.
So people eventually might not like that product advertised if it bothers them too much.
>> Correct!
OR: So, if the advertised product bothers people too much, they may eventually dislike it.
Also, some advertising can make people overate the product, which may not be helpful in judging the product appropriately.
>> Correct!
OR: Furthermore, some advertising can cause people to overestimate the product, which may make it difficult to evaluate it appropriately.
For beneficial effects, advertising gives consumers information about specific product and supplier can sell more products.
>> Correct!
OR: Advertising benefits consumers by providing information about specific products and allowing suppliers to sell more products.
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