What are the important news in your country right now?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a local election on June 1st in South Korea. So wherever I go, I can hear and see it. And the important news these days is that interest rates keep going up. All I can hear is that the coronavirus, Russia, and Ukraine are at war, and it\'s.
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>> The most important news nowadays is the local election on June 1st in South Korea.
So wherever I go, I can hear and see it.
>> CORRECT
And the important news these days is that interest rates keep going up.
>>Another important news these days is that interest rates keep going up.
All I can hear is that the coronavirus, Russia, and Ukraine are at war, and it\'s.
>> All I can hear are about COVID-19 and the war between Russia and Ukraine.
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