What are the important news in your country right now?
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Nowadays, there are a lot of important news in my country, but in my opinion, the most important news in my country is that the bees
- are decreasing.
We don\'t know the obvious reason about the news, but I think it is because of the abnormal weather.
My friends and other people are not disgusting about this news, but I think it is really serious case.
Because the bees pollinate more than 50 percents of flowers and other plants.
Because of this reason, I think the news about decreasing bees is the most important news nowadays in my country.
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Nowadays, there are a lot of important news in my country, but in my opinion, the most important news in my country is that the bees are decreasing.
>> CORRECT
We don\'t know the obvious reason about the news, but I think it is because of the abnormal weather.
>> CORRECT
My friends and other people are not disgusting about this news, but I think it is really serious case.
>> My friends and other people are not disgusting about this news, but I think it is a really serious case.
Because the bees pollinate more than 50 percents of flowers and other plants.
>> It because the bees pollinate more than 50 percent of flowers and other plants.
Because of this reason, I think the news about decreasing bees is the most important news nowadays in my country.
>> Because of this reason, I think the news about the decrease of the population bees is the most important news nowadays in my country.
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