What are the important news in your country right now?
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What are the important news in your country right now?
our country has no important news right now.
The most important presidential election of this year ended.
The important news in the world is the war between Russia and Ukraine.
Nobody can predict when the war will end.
Everyone hopes that the war is ended soon.
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I hope so too. A lot of people are suffering now.
our country has no important news right now.
>> Our country has no important news right now.
The most important presidential election of this year ended.
>> The most important was the presidential election this year, which has already ended.
The important news in the world is the war between Russia and Ukraine.
>> CORRECT
Nobody can predict when the war will end.
>> CORRECT
Everyone hopes that the war is ended soon.
>> Everyone hopes that the war will end soon.
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