What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter?

In the past, It is the most important quality for good sun or daughter to achieve fame ans prestige and these days "the Success" is most important quality too. It is basically except healthy and polite attitude. That is common sense, so except it, that is most important. That's the reason why Korean parents concentrate on their child education. For example, in our culture child's' life is not their own life, it is also concerned about their parents' life and fame. From birth to die, we keep learning how to success or succeed our parents fame, even sometimes parent anticipate with their success through their children's success. These days this kind of thinking getting weak, however if I success I also feel proud of myself and it make my parents make feel proud and comfortable.

Hello [이름]! ^^ Thank you for your wonderful essay! ^^ You have a good vocabulary repertoire but it can be improved. Your essay expressed your point quite clearly although there are better words to make it even better. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     In the past, It is the most important quality for good sun or daughter to achieve fame ans prestige and these days \"the Success\" is most important quality too. >> In the past, the most important quality of a good son or daughter is achieving fame or prestige and nowadays, being \"successful\" is also considered most important.   It is basically except healthy and polite attitude. That is common sense, so except it, that is most important. >> It is fundamental aside from being healthy and polite which are quite logical and also important.   That\'s the reason why Korean parents concentrate on their child education. >> This is the reason why Korean parents concentrate so much on their child\'s education. For example, in our culture child\'s\' life is not their own life, it is also concerned about their parents\' life and fame. >> For example, in our culture, a child\'s life is not their own but it is also connected to their parents\' lives and repute.   From birth to die, we keep learning how to success or succeed our parents fame, even sometimes parent anticipate with their success through their children\'s success. >> From the moment we were born until the day we die, we continue to learn how to be successful or to carry on our parents\' reputation even though, parents rely on their childrens accolade as their own.   These days this kind of thinking getting weak, however if I success I also feel proud of myself and it make my parents make feel proud and comfortable. >> Nowadays, this ideology has been weakening however, if I am successful, I feel proud of myself and it makes my parents feel proud and satisfied.