What are the ingredients of your favorite food and how often do you eat it?
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My favorite food is pizza which are so delicious. because the cheese and chewy dow always makes me mouth-watering. i really like pizza. I eat it almost every week! since i was young. pizza consist with, you know, flour, pepperoni, cheese and some vegetable like a onion and olive. actually i don\'t like vegetable but i eat every vegetable in pizza. so i eat it not only my birthday but also the days nothing special.
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Hello Robin!
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Read the corrections and improve your grammar by noticing your mistakes. Keep on learning and surround yourself with more English. ^^
~T. Maine
>>My favorite food is pizza which is so delicious.
because the cheese and chewy dow always makes me mouth-watering.
>> It is because the cheese and chewy dough always make me mouthwatering.
i really like pizza.
>> I really like pizza.
I eat it almost every week! since i was young.
>> I eat it almost every week since I was young.
pizza consist with, you know, flour, pepperoni, cheese and some vegetable like a onion and olive.
>> Pizza consist of flour, pepperoni, cheese, and some vegetables such as onions and olives.
actually i don\'t like vegetable but i eat every vegetable in pizza.
>> Actually, I don\'t like vegetables but I eat every piece of it in the pizza.
so i eat it not only my birthday but also the days nothing special.
>> So I eat it not only on my birthday but also on not so special days.
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