What are the innovative ways that your country has so far come up with to replace plastic bags? Are
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We can purchase trash bag instead of disposal plastic bag. We can put the items that we bought in the trash bag. It means that we can use it as trash bag and shopping bag. Or the big grocery store sells eco-bag instead of plastic bags. Also, there are paper boxes in front of the store. They are prepared for wrapping the items that people bought. If there are people who want to use plastic bags, they should buy plastic bags paying 50-100 won in most stores in Korea. It was offered for free few years ago, but not now. Furthermore, there are lots of environment education in schools. Especially, the young children like to make or draw something. So, the activities which makes eco-bags are popular. The young children try to bring their own eco-bags whenever they go to store, and it will be helpful to strengthen right environment awareness. At last, most companies try to pack the goods with the paper or the other materials to reduce using of plastic bags.
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Thanks for this Mary!
We can purchase trash bag instead of disposal plastic bag.
>>> correct
>>> OR: We can purchase a trash bag instead of a disposable plastic bag.
We can put the items that we bought in the trash bag.
>>> correct
It means that we can use it as trash bag and shopping bag.
>>> correct
>>> OR: It means, we can use it either as a trash bag or a shopping bag.
Or the big grocery store sells eco-bag instead of plastic bags.
>>> correct
Also, there are paper boxes in front of the store.
>>> correct
They are prepared for wrapping the items that people bought.
>>> correct
If there are people who want to use plastic bags, they should buy plastic bags paying 50-100 won in most stores in Korea.
>>> correct
It was offered for free few years ago, but not now.
>>> correct
Furthermore, there are lots of environment education in schools.
>>> correct
Especially, the young children like to make or draw something.
>>> correct
>>> OR: The young children in particular like making or drawing something.
So, the activities which makes eco-bags are popular.
>>> correct
The young children try to bring their own eco-bags whenever they go to store, and it will be helpful to strengthen right environment awareness.
>>> correct
At last, most companies try to pack the goods with the paper or the other materials to reduce using of plastic bags.
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>>> OR: Lastly, most companies try to pack the goods with paper or other non-plastic materials to reduce using of plastic bags.
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