What are the laws in your country regarding deadly and lethal weapons?
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Korea has one of the most restrictive gun policies in the world. It has strict limits on gun possession by private citizens while other countries like the US and Yemen allow for relatively greater access. Countries like Canada and Finland fall in between. Firearms of any kind are illegal to possess by any citizen not serving in the military, presidential guard, or special units of the metropolitan police. Military service for Korean men is mandatory, but that is probably the only time a regular civilian will have a chance to hold a gun. Hunting and sporting licenses are issued, but any firearm used in these circumstances must be stored at a local police station. Even possessing a toy gun ‘that resembles a real gun’ is strictly prohibited. In the past five years, a total of 50 cases of gun-related crimes leading to death or injury were reported. Many were accidents, not intentional murder attempts. Deadly weapons like knives, sword, or striking instruments are not permitted as well.
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Korea has one of the most restrictive gun policies in the world.
>> Correct!
It has strict limits on gun possession by private citizens while other countries like the US and Yemen allow for relatively greater access.
>> There are strict limits on gun possession to citizens while other countries, like the US and Yemen, allow a relatively greater access.
>> OR: There are strict limits on gun possession to citizens while other countries, like the US and Yemen, are a bit lenient.
Countries like Canada and Finland fall in between.
>> Correct!
Firearms of any kind are illegal to possess by any citizen not serving in the military, presidential guard, or special units of the metropolitan police.
>> Firearms of any kind are illegal to possess by any citizen who is not in the military, a presidential guard, or special units of the metropolitan police.
Military service for Korean men is mandatory, but that is probably the only time a regular civilian will have a chance to hold a gun.
>> Military service for Korean men is mandatory, but that is probably the only time a regular civilian will have the chance to hold a gun.
Hunting and sporting licenses are issued, but any firearm used in these circumstances must be stored at a local police station.
>> Hunting and sporting licenses are issued, but any firearm used in these circumstances must be stored in a local police station.
Even possessing a toy gun ‘that resembles a real gun’ is strictly prohibited.
>> Correct!
In the past five years, a total of 50 cases of gun-related crimes leading to death or injury were reported.
>> Correct!
Many were accidents, not intentional murder attempts.
>> Did you mean: Many of these were accidental or unintentional crimes.
Deadly weapons like knives, sword, or striking instruments are not permitted as well.
>> Correct!
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