What are the lessons that you got in doing a lot of part-time jobs?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, The biggest lesson I have felt is the value of money.
And I experienced social life early in my life.
Above all, I felt the greatness of my parents while part-time working.
Now I am 35 years old.
I have a hard but enjoyable life in my early 20\"s, so I am still living hard now.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I learn something valuable from this homework. Thank you!
~Teacher Sheila
>>First, the biggest lesson I have learned is the value of money.
And I experienced social life early in my life.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I experienced social life early.
Above all, I felt the greatness of my parents while part-time working.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Above all, I felt the importance of my parents whole working part-time.
Now I am 35 years old.
>>CORRECT
I have a hard but enjoyable life in my early 20\"s, so I am still living hard now.
>>I had a hard but enjoyable life in my early 20\'s and I am still living hard now.
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