What are the main causes for people getting divorced?
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It is hard to live with parters who It is hard to live with parters who have different thoughts and life patten for a long time.
If that`s case, It will lead to get divorce. In my opnion, in order to maintain relationship they have to recognize for respective life and difference about some situations.
Thesedays the number of divorce Increase compare with past time. some expertise are explaining the reason why the frequency of getting divorce raise. That is what the women are playing role as economic entites. So, they don`t need to wish something that they want from the men.
Finally, I think that the symtoms are from society atmosphere. If you look around their life space like work place and gathering and so on, they can find a lot of person who got divorce.
Individually i hope that before deciding getting married, they have to consider a lot of thing deeply.
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It is hard to live with parters who It is hard to live with parters who have different thoughts and life patten for a long time.
>>>> It\'s hard to live with partners who are so different from us in terms of views, habits or even lifestyle.
If that`s case, It will lead to get divorce. In my opnion, in order to maintain relationship they have to recognize for respective life and difference about some situations.
>>>> If that\'s the case, it will lead to a divorce. From my personal standpoint, in order to maintain the relationship, the couple has to acknowledge and respect each other\'s differences.
Thesedays the number of divorce Increase compare with past time.
>>>> The divorce rate has dramatically increased these days compared to the past.
some expertise are explaining the reason why the frequency of getting divorce raise.
>>>> Some experts explained the reasons for the rise of divorce rates.
That is what the women are playing role as economic entites.
>>>> One reason for a divorce is that women are now playing a huge role in the economy, which means that more and more women work outside the house in the modern era.
So, they don`t need to wish something that they want from the men.
>>>> So they don\'t need to ask for monetary support from their partners.
Finally, I think that the symtoms are from society atmosphere.
>> Finally, I think that the society itself should share the blame because couples can see a great number of divorced people everywhere - be it in a workplace, gathering, and so on.
Individually i hope that before deciding getting married, they have to consider a lot of thing deeply.
>>>> I hope that people in this day and age would think carefully and consider everything before getting married.
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