What are the major differences between English and your native language? Answer in 5 sentences or mo
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I think that my major language is English. There are several reason why I choose English. First, English is official language of world. I have quiet many experience to travel abroad, and I felt a lot of things that English is important. Even though If I ask about location where I want, I need to speak English. Therefore, I think we need to learn English if you like traveling.
Secondly, It is necessary to improve my career though the global business. Actually, I want to grow up myself to the world, so I will apply foreign company after 3 years. At that time, it will be really important me that I achieve my career.
The last thing, I have a lot of foreign friends. One of the reason that I studied English is exchange culture and make various type of countries friends. And I want to build our relationship.
Here is the reason that I think English is my major language.
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I think that my major language is English.>> I think that a major language is English.
There are several reason why I choose English.
>> There are several reasons why I choose English.
First, English is official language of world.
>> First, English is the official language of the world.
I have quiet many experience to travel abroad, and I felt a lot of things that English is important.
>> I have quite a lot of experience in traveling abroad and I felt that English was important in different instances.
Even though If I ask about location where I want, I need to speak English.
>> I need to speak in English even when I ask for directions to go to a specific location.
Therefore, I think we need to learn English if you like traveling.
>> Therefore, I think we need to learn English if we like traveling.
Secondly, It is necessary to improve my career though the global business.
Secondly, It is necessary to improve my career though the global business.
>> Second, it is necessary to improve my career through the global business.
Actually, I want to grow up myself to the world, so I will apply foreign company after 3 years.
>> Actually, I want to introduce myself to the world, so I will apply to a foreign company after 3 years.
At that time, it will be really important me that I achieve my career.
>> At that time, it will be really important for me that I succeed in my career.
The last thing, I have a lot of foreign friends.
The last thing, I have a lot of foreign friends.
>> The last thing is that I have a lot of foreign friends.
One of the reason that I studied English is exchange culture and make various type of countries friends.
>> One of the reasons that I studied English is to learn about culture and make various friends from different countries.
And I want to build our relationship.
>> I want to build these relationships.
Here is the reason that I think English is my major language.
Here is the reason that I think English is my major language.
>> These are the reasons why I think that English is a major language.
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