What are the most common causes of certain diseases?
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Sugar diabetes I believe is the most common disease in South Korea. [이름]ce most of people in Korea tend to have a salty eating habit such as Kimchi, Kimchi stew, Spam, etc. I\'ve seen a documentary where it raises blood sugar levels and causes diabetes. I don\'t trust 100 percent, it makes sense. In addition to that, I think the incidence is even higher because there is a food culture where people drink soju or beer.
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Sugar diabetes I believe is the most common disease in South Korea.
>> I believe Diabetes is the most common disease in South Korea.
[이름]ce most of people in Korea tend to have a salty eating habit such as Kimchi, Kimchi stew, Spam, etc.
>> The reason is that most people in Korea tend to have salty food such as Kimchi, Kimchi stew, spam, etc.
I\'ve seen a documentary where it raises blood sugar levels and causes diabetes.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t trust 100 percent, it makes sense.
>> I don\'t trust it 100 percent, but it makes sense.
In addition to that, I think the incidence is even higher because there is a food culture where people drink soju or beer.
>> CORRECT!
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