What are the most common causes of diseases?
학생이 쓴 원문
Not washing hands, disdaining prevention are the problems. So in one word, Not being conscious in epidemic or disease may be the problem. Also at the past, many didn\'t know how serious the disease is. It is same too. Now, for example, Wuhan Coronavirus was outbreaked because of some people\'s eating. Well it is hard to notice that eating is related with flu but at least thay should\'ve know that eating bad is eccentric. If this situation, Coronavirus, I want government and health authority to regulate things that would occur virus.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
This is a very simple and direct answer.
This is actually a good answer.
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~~ Teacher James
Not washing hands, disdaining prevention are the problems.
>>> CORRECT
So in one word, Not being conscious in epidemic or disease may be the problem.
>>> CORRECT
Also at the past, many didn\'t know how serious the disease is.
>>> Also in the past, many didn\'t know how serious the disease is.
It is same too. Now, for example, Wuhan Coronavirus was outbreaked because of some people\'s eating.
>>> It is the same too. Now, for example, Wuhan Coronavirus was an outbreak because of some people\'s eating.
Well it is hard to notice that eating is related with flu but at least thay should\'ve know that eating bad is eccentric.
>>> Well, it is hard to notice that eating is related to flu but at least they should\'ve known that eating bad is eccentric.
If this situation, Coronavirus, I want government and health authority to regulate things that would occur virus.
>>> If this situation, Coronavirus, I want government and health authorities to regulate things that would occur viruses.
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