What are the most common methods of payment in your country? Do you find it convenient?
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The most common methods of payment are the cards like credit and check card. Some people are having several cards to pay for some items. This is because cards issued respective company offer different benefits. For example, After charging the oil I tends to use some type of credit card instea of cash or check card because They give me points which are transfer points to cash. In order to save money, It would be a great way to use it.
Thesedays if I spends money, the record would storage by affiliating with some application. It lead to manage my budget and keep track of how much money i spend this month and this week.
In korea, most of workers want to refund taxes from the government at the end of the year. To expand refunded taxes they are trying to buy something through diverse payment method. Given that, the government give some worker who are using several payment method a more tax refund than others.
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. A cashless society is definitely more convenient.
- T. Beth
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The most common methods of payment are the cards like credit and check card. >>> correct
Some people are having several cards to pay for some items.
>>> OR: Some people use several cards to pay for some items.
This is because cards issued respective company offer different benefits.
>>> This is because cards issued by respective companies offer different benefits.
For example, After charging the oil I tends to use some type of credit card instea of cash or check card because They give me points which are transfer points to cash.
>>> For example, after charge the gas I tend to use some type of credit card instead of cash or check card because they give me points which are converted to cash.
In order to save money, It would be a great way to use it.
>>> correct
Thesedays if I spends money, the record would storage by affiliating with some application.
Thesedays if I spends money, the record would storage by affiliating with some application.
>>> These days, if I spends money, the record would be stored by affiliating to some applications.
>> OR: These days, transactions are recorded through some applications.
It lead to manage my budget and keep track of how much money i spend this month and this week.
>>> It leads to managing my budget and keeping track of how much money I spend this month and this week.
In korea, most of workers want to refund taxes from the government at the end of the year.
>>> In Korea, most workers want to refund taxes from the government at the end of the year.
To expand refunded taxes they are trying to buy something through diverse payment method.
>>> correct
Given that, the government give some worker who are using several payment method a more tax refund than others.
>>> Given that, the government give some workers who are using several payment methods more tax refund than others.
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