What are the most expensive fruits in Korea? Do you think they are worth the price?
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Apples are the most expensive nowadays in Korea.
It is about 4,000won per piece ($3~4)
Apple farming is not good because abnormal climate.
I understand the reasons but I think it is too expensive.
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What are the most expensive fruits in Korea? Do you think they are worth the price?
Apples are the most expensive nowadays in Korea.
>> CORRECT~~
It is about 4,000 won per piece ($3~4).
>> OR: A single apple is worth 4, 000 won or $3-4.
Apple farming is not good because abnormal climate.
>> Apple farming is not good because of the abnormal climate.
I understand the reasons but I think it is too expensive.
>> OR: I understand why it\'s costly but I still think it\'s much.
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