What are the most important aspects of your country’s heritage and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the most effective things to understand other countries culture?
If they would experience specific countries culture, they can understand other culture quickly and accurately. This is answer about why we have to preserve it. Person who has knowledge for special countries culture are able to adopt new society.
For example, the western company wanna make foray into asia market, The success depends on whether they understand asia culture or not.
Second, we hope that the childerens were made to remember korea historic culture and It lead to inform the special information to the person. because the heritage help us to get awareness about korea hoistory, we have to preserve that.
And We have to give the young generations because the heritage will play a role as bridge conneting new generation with the older generation.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. I completely agree with the last statement.
- T. Beth
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If they would experience specific countries culture, they can understand other culture quickly and accurately.
If they would experience specific countries culture, they can understand other culture quickly and accurately.
>>> correct
This is answer about why we have to preserve it.
>>> This is the answer to why we have to preserve it.
Person who has knowledge for special countries culture are able to adopt new society.
>>> A person who has knowledge on special countries\' culture is able to adopt to the new society.
For example, the western company wanna make foray into asiamarket, The success depends on whether they understand asia culture or not.
For example, the western company wanna make foray into asiamarket, The success depends on whether they understand asia culture or not.
>>> For example, if the western company wanna make foray into the Asian market, the success depends on whether they understand Asian culture or not.
Second, we hope that the childerens were made to remember korea historic culture and It lead to inform the special information to the person.
>>> Second, we hope that the children were made to remember Korean historic culture and to educate the person.
because the heritage help us to get awareness about korea hoistory, we have to preserve that.
>>> Because the heritage help us to be aware of Korean history, we have to preserve it.
And We have to give the young generations because the heritage will play a role as bridge conneting new generation with the older generation.
>>> And we have to hand it down to the young generations because the heritage will play the role as a bridge connecting new generation with the older generation.
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