What are the most important features when determining someone\'s beauty? How would the world be diff
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I don\'t have idea about what the features make me think beautiful. Because it is very different depending on individuals.
But I\'m sure appearance is very important in our life.
I saw the picture that someone collected and overlapped every Korean people\'s face pictures.
I thought that was ideal appearance of Korean men or women.
I heard that everyone prefer someone who looks like themselves.
It was a result of experiment that let people choose pictures as their ideal boy/girl friend appearance.
And most of people chose the picture that was manipulated using their face.
If nobody defines standard of beauty, many people would prefer the person who looks like themselves.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ian.
Happy Monday. I agree, everyone has his or her own preference when it comes to what they consider as beautiful or not. I think the most important thing is even if we don\'t find others beautiful, we still respect them.
-T. Caitlin
I don\'t have idea about what the features make me think beautiful. Because it is very different depending on individuals.
>> I don\'t have any idea about what features make a person beautiful because it differs depending on the individual\'s preference.
But I\'m sure appearance is very important in our life.
But I\'m sure appearance is very important in our life.
>> CORRECT
I saw the picture that someone collected and overlapped every Korean people\'s face pictures.
I saw the picture that someone collected and overlapped every Korean people\'s face pictures.
>> I saw the picture that someone collected and overlapped every Korean\'s face picture.
I thought that was ideal appearance of Korean men or women.
I thought that was ideal appearance of Korean men or women.
>> I thought that was the ideal appearance of Korean men or women.
I heard that everyone prefer someone who looks like themselves.
I heard that everyone prefer someone who looks like themselves.
>> I heard that everyone prefers someone who looks like themselves.
It was a result of experiment that let people choose pictures as their ideal boy/girl friend appearance.
It was a result of experiment that let people choose pictures as their ideal boy/girl friend appearance.
>> It was a result of an experiment that let people choose pictures as their ideal boyfriend/girlfriend\'s appearance.
And most of people chose the picture that was manipulated using their face.
And most of people chose the picture that was manipulated using their face.
>> Most of the people chose the picture that was manipulated using their faces.
If nobody defines standard of beauty, many people would prefer the person who looks like themselves.
If nobody defines standard of beauty, many people would prefer the person who looks like themselves.
>> If nobody defines the standard of beauty, many people would prefer the person who looks like themselves.
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