What are the most important things you want to share when introducing yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
My hobby is playing the piano and running exercise.
When i was eight, My mother recommanded me that I learn a piano.
So, I learned piano ten years. It is my favorite hobby.
Thesedays, I interested in jazz piano. I am [Name] Jazz piano alone. But It is very hard and difficult.
So, I started to learn Jazz Piano last month near my house.
Studying new one is very born and difficult, But I believe that I will a be nice Jazz piano player.
I think that playing piano hobby is special thing when introducing my self
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Your passion for playing the piano really shines through in your writing. It’s great to see your dedication to learning jazz piano, even though you find it challenging. Keep up the hard work. I believe you’re on your way to becoming a great jazz pianist!
~ T. Lia
My hobby is playing the piano and running exercise.
>> My hobbies are playing the piano and running.
When i was eight, My mother recommanded me that I learn a piano.
>> When I was eight, my mother recommended that I learn the piano.
So, I learned piano ten years. It is my favorite hobby.
>> So, I learned the piano for ten years. It is my favorite hobby.
Thesedays, I interested in jazz piano.
>> These days, I am interested in jazz piano.
I am [Name] Jazz piano alone. But It is very hard and difficult.
>> I am studying jazz piano on my own, but it is very hard and challenging.
So, I started to learn Jazz Piano last month near my house.
>> So, I started learning jazz piano last month at a place near my house.
Studying new one is very born and difficult, But I believe that I will a be nice Jazz piano player.
>> Learning something new is very boring and difficult, but I believe that I will become a good jazz piano player.
I think that playing piano hobby is special thing when introducing my self.
>> I think that having piano as a hobby is something special when introducing myself.
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