What are the most important things your parents taught you?
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ESSAY QUESTION:
What are the most important things your parents taught you?
My parents have already passed away but my memory on them is as vivid as yesterday,
>>My parents have already passed away but my memories of them is as vivid as yesterday.
especially sometimes I still think about my mother.
>>Especially, there are times when I still think of my mother.
She passed away 5 years ago, when she was 92 years old.
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or>>She passed away at the age of 92, 5 years ago.
She alway said her children including me to live frankly not to deceive others.
>>She always told her children, including myself, to live honestly and not to deceive others.
I recognize after her death that her word was based on her religious belief.
>>I recognized after her death, that her words were based on her religious beliefs.
And also I repect my father, but unfortunately he passed away at the age of 65.
>> And also I respected my father, but unfortunately, he passed away at the age of 65.
He affected me in many ways of my life.
>>He affected my life in so many ways.
He taught me to live hard and do your best for anything.
>>He taught me to live hard and to do my best in everything.
He also told me to keep the faith to others.
>>He also told me to have faith in others.
I deeply kept in mind his word of \"the Faith\",
>>I kept his advice on “Faith” at heart.
so I set up the word of \"the Faith\" as my family\'s motto.
>>So, I have set up his advice on \"Faith\" as my family\'s motto.
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