What are the most important things your parents taught you?

2019-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Actually, I was flustered when I got this question. Because I usually have thought there\'s nearly nothing to emulate from my parents. That\'s the reason why I hesitate to answer the question. I always have been seeking the bad points of them. For instance, I\'ve hated my mother\'s personality that always meddle in other people\'s affairs. Also, I\'ve felt complaints about my father\'s mild personality becuase it seems too naive sometimes. But taking this question opportunity, I reconsider my parent\'s character. And I found that there are lessons come from my parents actually. First, my mother always does her own works completly. I think it affects me to do the best in everything. my father is good at avoiding the conflicts with people. This point presents me good relations with people. Above all things yet, endless love and supports for their children are the best lessons that I learned from them. After finding the good points of them, it feels easy to respect them well. ^ _ ^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your answer.
I \'m glad that you were able to find an answer for the challenging question that we encountered earlier.
I think, it\'s true that our parents have bad points that we really don\'t like but it\'s always good to know that despite their flaws, they were still able to share and show us something good- something that we\'ll use in our life. ^^

Thank you, once again and have a good night.

~Teacher Gina


Actually, I was flustered when I got this question. Because I usually have thought there\'s nearly nothing to emulate from my parents. 
>> CORRECT.
That\'s the reason why I hesitate to answer the question. 
>> That\'s the reason why I hesitated to answer the question.
I always have been seeking the bad points of them.
>> CORRECT.
For instance, I\'ve hated my mother\'s personality that always meddle in other people\'s affairs. 
>> CORRECT.
Also, I\'ve felt complaints about my father\'s mild personality becuase it seems too naive sometimes. 
>> I also felt complaints about my father\'s mild personality because it seems like he\'s too naive sometimes.
But taking this question opportunity, I reconsider my parent\'s character.
>> But taking this question as an opportunity, I reconsidered my parent\'s character.
And I found that there are lessons come from my parents actually. 
>> And I found that there are lessons that actually came from my parents.
>> Or: And I found that I actually learned lessons from my parents.
First, my mother always does her own works completely. I think it affects me to do the best in everything. my father is good at avoiding the conflicts with people. This point presents me good relations with people. Above all things yet, endless love and supports for their children are the best lessons that I learned from them.
>> CORRECT.
After finding the good points of them, it feels easy to respect them well. ^ _ ^
>> After finding the good points about them, it feels easy to respect them well.

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