What are the most popular tourist destinations in your country? Is there much interesting architectu
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One of the popular travel destinations in Korea is Gyeongju.
Gyeongju was the capital of Silla dynasty which was a nation for about two thousand years ago.
So we can see many architectures there like Buddhism towers, the oldest astronomical observation tower in the East.
Watching those architectures, we are surprised how the architect techniques were fine and how the science was developed in that old time.
We also can view many beautiful cherry blossoms there in Spring season so I would like to recommend to visit Gyeongju if you would have a chance to come to Korea someday.
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Hey there, [이름]. Thank you for introducing Gyeongju. I enjoyed reading your homework. I hope someday I could travel to Gyeongju and see its beauty myself. Have a good one and let\'s talk in class later. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
One of the popular travel destinations in Korea is Gyeongju.
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Gyeongju was the capital of Silla dynasty which was a nation for about two thousand years ago.
>>> Gyeongju was the capital of the Silla dynasty which was a nation for about two thousand years ago.
So we can see many architectures there like Buddhism towers, the oldest astronomical observation tower in the East.
>>> CORRECT =)
Watching those architectures, we are surprised how the architect techniques were fine and how the science was developed in that old time.
>>> CORRECT =)
We also can view many beautiful cherry blossoms there in Spring season so I would like to recommend to visit Gyeongju if you would have a chance to come to Korea someday.
>>> We also can view many beautiful cherry blossoms there in the Spring season so I would like to recommend visiting Gyeongju if you would have a chance to come to Korea someday.
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