What are the negative impacts of playing computer games? What can be done to minimize the bad effect
학생이 쓴 원문
The reason why you asked the question above is that you heard the sound of my son playing computer games during our class, isn\'t it?^^ I think playing computer games could be a leisure for my children who were under lots of things to study. Therefore, I want to let them enjoy their leisure by doing whatever they want.
I don\'t deny that playing computer games has a negative impact on my children. However, I can minimize the bad influence of computer games by controlling the time they play them. Rather, I can encourage my children to study more with computer games set as a bonus for their hard work. That\'s because if I can\'t keep my children away from computer games for good, I need to think about using them to my children\'s advantage or help my children not be obsessed with computer games.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve. I asked this question because I\'m wondering what kind of parent you are. ^_^ I\'m also a parent so I wonder how others handle this situation. Thank you for sharing your idea. ^_^
Teacher Irene
The reason why you asked the question above is that you heard the sound of my son playing computer games during our class, isn\'t it?^^
>>> Correct.
I think playing computer games could be a leisure for my children who were under lots of things to study.
>>> I think playing computer games could be a leisure activity for my children who are under a lot of pressure or stress from studying a lot.
Therefore, I want to let them enjoy their leisure by doing whatever they want.
>>> Therefore, I want to let them enjoy their leisure time by doing whatever they want.
I don\'t deny that playing computer games has a negative impact on my children.
I don\'t deny that playing computer games has a negative impact on my children.
>>> Correct.
However, I can minimize the bad influence of computer games by controlling the time they play them.
>>> Correct.
Rather, I can encourage my children to study more with computer games set as a bonus for their hard work.
>>> Moreover, I can encourage my children to study harder using computer time as a bonus for their hard work.
That\'s because if I can\'t keep my children away from computer games for good, I need to think about using them to my children\'s advantage or help my children not be obsessed with computer games.
>>> Correct.
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