What are the negative points or dangers of backpacking?
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Nowadays people are travel all over the world, no matter what they got money or not.
>>> Nowadays people travel all over the world whether they have the money or not.
Young people are backpacking trip everywhere.
>>> Young people go on a backpacking trip everywhere.
They are staying in the tent,as well as make their own food.
>>> They are staying in the tent, as well as making their own food.
They take public transportation that cost so cheap compared to renting car.
>>> They take the public transportation rather renting a car.
I had never that experience as well asI feel like it is not safe,but young generation are so braves.
>>> I have never experience it. I feel like it is not safe. Young people are so brave to do it.
I watched the TV one day the young girl went to the desert by herself.
>>> I want a T.V. program, one day a girl went to the desert by herself.
I could imagine how she was hard that situation.
>>> I could just imagine that she was having a hard time.
Backpacking trip is not safe.
>>> Correct!
I don’t recommend for anybody.
>>> I wouldn\'t recommend it to anybody.
When I always go to the travel somewhere my prior concern is the safe issue also I am very
Picky about eating place.
>>> When I go places my prior concern is my safety, I am also a picky person when it comes to food.
When we want to travel without known country that have to study
first before.
>>> When I want to travel to a new country I want to study first.
I had very bad experience in Europe trip.
>>> I had a bad experience when I went to Europe.
I don’t think about that trip again.
>>> I don\'t want to think about that trip again.
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