What are the negative points or dangers of backpacking?

2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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Nowadays people are travel all over the world, no matter what they got money or not. Young people are backpacking trip everywhere. They are staying in the tent,as well as make their own food. They take public transportation that cost so cheap compared to renting car. I had never that experience as well asI feel like it is not safe,but young generation are so braves. I watched the TV one day the young girl went to the desert by herself. I could imagine how she was hard that situation.Backpacking trip is not safe. I don’t recommend for anybody. When I always go to the travel somewhere my prior concern is the safe issue also I am very Picky about eating place. When we want to travel without known country that have to study first before. I had very bad experience in Europe trip. I don’t think about that trip again.

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-Teacher Shelly-


Nowadays people are travel all over the world, no matter what they got money or not.

>>> Nowadays people travel all over the world whether they have the money or not

Young people are backpacking trip everywhere.

>>> Young people go on a backpacking trip everywhere.

 They are staying in the tent,as well as make their own food.

>>> They are staying in the tent, as well as making their own food.

 They take public transportation that cost so cheap compared to renting car.

>>> They take the public transportation rather renting a car. 
 I had never that experience as well asI feel like it is not safe,but young generation are so braves.

>>> I have never experience it. I feel like it is not safe. Young people are so brave to do it.
 I watched the TV one day the young girl went to the desert by herself.

>>> I want a T.V. program, one day a girl went to the desert by herself.

I could imagine how she was hard that situation.

>>> I could just imagine that she was having a hard time.

Backpacking trip is not safe.

>>>  Correct!

I don’t recommend for anybody.

>>> I wouldn\'t recommend it to anybody.

When I always go to the travel somewhere my prior concern is the safe issue also I am very
Picky about eating place.

>>> When I go places my prior concern is my safety, I am also a picky person when it comes to food.

When we want to travel without known country that have to study
first before.

>>> When I want to travel to a new country I want to study first.

 I had very bad experience in Europe trip.

>>> I had a bad experience when I went to Europe.

I don’t think about that trip again.

>>> I don\'t want to think about that trip again.

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