What are the other activities can people do in Han River?
학생이 쓴 원문
Han River is a good place.
The jogging course and parks is great.
When I have a hard time, I go to Han River alone.
I can walk to Han River from my house.
People can ride bike, take a board,skate inline.
They have a rest on the grasses .
They can blow the toy drones.
강사 첨삭
Han River is a good place.
>> CORRECT
The jogging course and parks is great.
>> The jogging course and parks are great.
When I have a hard time, I go to Han River alone.
>> I go to Han River whenever I have a hard time.
I can walk to Han River from my house.
>> CORRECT
People can ride bike, take a board,skate inline.
>> People can ride bikes, boards and skates in line.
They have a rest on the grasses .
>> They rest on the grass.
They can blow the toy drones.
>> They can fly drones.
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