What are the other popular summer destinations in Korea?
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There are many popular places for summer holiday in Korea, such as Jeju Island, East, South, West coast areas. East coast has deep blue seas and lots of fresh fish. South seas have many beautiful small islands and fantastic sceneries. West bound is famous for mud which is good for body skin. Any place is wonderful.
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1. There are many popular places for summer holiday in Korea, such as Jeju Island, East, South, West coast areas.
>>CORRECT!
2. East coast has deep blue seas and lots of fresh fish.
>>CORRECT!
3. The South seas have many beautiful small islands and fantastic sceneries.
>>CORRECT!
4. West bound is famous for mud which is good for body skin.
>>The West coast is famous for its mud which is good for skin.
5. Any place is wonderful.
>>CORRECT!
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