What are the plants that you planted?

2020-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I planted some hot pepper, cucumber, watermelone, lettuce... after I worked in my farm, I take it to my house and eat it with my family. I already said I want to do after retirement. but it is very difficult to do. when I get old, farm work is very hard. so I don\'t want to do agriculture..

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]~
Thank you for doing your homework. You did great. See you again tomorrow. Have a nice day.

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I planted some hot pepper, cucumber, watermelone, lettuce...

>> CORRECT; watermelon

after I worked in my farm, I take it to my house and eat it with my family.

>> After harvesting the fruits of the plants, I then take them to my house and eat them with my family.

I already said I want to do after retirement. but it is very difficult to do.

>> I already said what I want to do after retiring but it\'s difficult to accomplish.

when I get old, farm work is very hard. so I don\'t want to do agriculture..

>> When I get old, I don\'t want to do agriculture because it\'s very hard.

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