What are the popular kinds of diet you\'ve heard of?
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I heard to rainbow diet. It is to have many colors food at once meal.
Many colors and kind food(vegetables, meats, rice, fruits, bread...) is included a lot of nutrients.
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I heard to rainbow diet.
>>> I heard about rainbow diet.
It is to have many colors food at once meal.
>>> It is to have many colors of food at one meal.
Many colors and kind food(vegetables, meats, rice, fruits, bread...) is included a lot of nutrients.
>>> Many colors and kinds of food(vegetables, meats, rice, fruits, bread...) has a lot of nutrients.
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