What are the positive and negative effects of technology in the future?

2020-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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I guess that artificial intelligence is the main technology in near future. We can use this technology in various ways such as autonomous robot, small robot which has micro camera and computer that can report diagnostic information. I would say about the technology within medical parts. AI computer can diagnose with the image information has been taken before. Therefore, human just need to confirm if the diagnosis what computers decide from previous data sets are right. It means that patients might get their diagnostic information faster than now. However, it is possible to get wrong information from the hospital because of the computer errors and so on. It can be crucial reason why people have to be careful when they release this technology in the industry.

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I guess that artificial intelligence is the main technology in near future.

>> I guess that artificial intelligence will be the main technology in the near future.

We can use this technology in various ways such as autonomous robot, small robot which has micro camera and computer that can report diagnostic information.

>> CORRECT

I would say about the technology within medical parts.

>> I talk about the technology within the medical field.

AI computer can diagnose with the image information has been taken before.

>> AI computers can diagnose using the image information which has been taken before.

Therefore, human just need to confirm if the diagnosis what computers decide from previous data sets are right.

>> Therefore, humans just need to confirm if the diagnosis decided by the computers from previous data sets are right.

It means that patients might get their diagnostic information faster than now.

>> CORRECT

However, it is possible to get wrong information from the hospital because of the computer errors and so on.

>> CORRECT

It can be crucial reason why people have to be careful when they release this technology in the industry.

>> It can be a crucial reason why people have to be careful when they release this technology in the industry. 

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