What are the positive and negative effects of technology in the future?
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Developing a technology makes our life comfortable and convenient.
>> Developing technology makes our life comfortable and convenient.
We can do easily and quickly what we want.
>> CORRECT
OR>> We can easily and quickly do what we want.
But people denpends on techno;ogy and get lazy and dull.
>> However, people depend on technology and get lazy and dull.
Computer calculate all and people don\'t need to think more.
>> Computers calculate everything so people don\'t need to think anymore.
Technology affects both side.
>> Technology affects both sides.
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