What are the positive and negative ways some people choose to deal with stress?
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17 years ago, I was a new employee. At that time, I often made mistakes. It made me crazy. When I got stress out, I drank a lot. I couldn\'t remind that how I drank and What did I say. But, Resources of stress didn\'t solve. The next day I had to do something for solving problems, but I couldn\'t do my best. Because of hangover. Drinking a lot isn\'t a good way to deal with stress. I think it is the worst way. Sleeping a lot, eating a lot are better than drinking a lot. Those ways are negative ways which people choose to deal with stress. Doing exercise, going on a vacation, leaning for solving problems are positive ways. When I get stress, I should prepare to solve resources of stress.
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What are the positive and negative ways some people choose to deal with stress?
17 years ago, I was a new employee. At that time, I often made mistakes. It made me crazy.
>>> CORRECT
When I got stress out, I drank a lot. I couldn\'t remind that how I drank and What did I say.
>>> When I got stressed out, I drank a lot. I couldn\'t remember how I drank and what did I say.
But, Resources of stress didn\'t solve. The next day I had to do something for solving problems, but I couldn\'t do my best. Because of hangover.
>>> But, drinking didn\'t solve my problem. The next day I had to do something to solve my problems, but I couldn\'t do my best because of hangover.
Drinking a lot isn\'t a good way to deal with stress. I think it is the worst way.
>>> CORRECT
Sleeping a lot, eating a lot are better than drinking a lot.
>>> Sleeping a lot, eating is better than drinking a lot.
Those ways are negative ways which people choose to deal with stress.
>>> Those are the negative ways in which people choose to deal with stress.
Doing exercise, going on a vacation, leaning for solving problems are positive ways.
>>> Doing an exercise, going on a vacation, learning to solve problems are the positive ways.
When I get stress, I should prepare to solve resources of stress.
>>> When I get stress, I should prepare to solve the sources of my stress.
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