What are the positive and negative ways some people choose to deal with stress?

2022-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Some people do exercise or have a hobby to deal with stress. It is positive things. However some people drink a lot of alcohol to deal with stress. It is negative way to deal with stress.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Some people do exercise or have a hobby to deal with stress.

>> Some people exercise or have a hobby to deal with stress.
It is positive things.

>> They are positive things.
However some people drink a lot of alcohol to deal with stress.

>> However, some people drink a lot of alcohol to deal with stress.
It is negative way to deal with stress.

>> It is a negative way to deal with stress.

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