What are the positive and negative ways some people choose to deal with stress?
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I think activity is good for dealing with stress like a sports.
However, if someone use addicted something like a gamble to deal with stress, it is not good.
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I think activity is good for dealing with stress like a sports.
>> I think activity is good for dealing with stress like sports.
However, if someone use addicted something like a gamble to deal with stress, it is not good.
>> However, if someone uses addiction, such as gambling, to deal with stress, it is not good.
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