What are the positive and negative ways some people choose to deal with stress?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is the positive things are get a hobby. It have organize your thoughts. And negative things are become lethargic. It doesn’t have any energy and power
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It is the positive things are get a hobby.
>>> The positive thing is to get a hobby.
It have organize your thoughts.
>>> It can organize your thoughts.
And negative things are become lethargic.
>>> On the other hand, the negative ones are those that make you lethargic.
It doesn’t have any energy and power
>>> It doesn’t give you any energy and power.
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