What are the positive and negative ways some people choose to deal with stress?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that exercising is good way to relieve stress.
However, there are some bad ways. for example, overeating food, buying something without any plan.
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I believe that exercising is good way to relieve stress.
I believe that exercising is a good way to relieve stress.
>> I think exercising is an effective way to relieve stress.
However, there are some bad ways. for example, overeating food, buying something without any plan.
>> However, there are also unhealthy ways of coping, such as overeating or buying things without any plan.
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