What are the possible benefits of working on weekends?

2022-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I think there are some benefits of working on weekends, especially if people who work on weekends can take two days off on weekdays ! First of all, They can be available hot places where are not many crowed. It’s very common to work on weekdays. So the people who could be there will be in the office. Secondly, They can save money because some places provide a weekdays promotion which they can use the place with a cheaper price. Finally, Also they can avoid rush-hour. I think it’s time saving and more comfortable.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I think there are some benefits of working on weekends, especially if people who work on weekends can take two days off on weekdays!

>> CORRECT!

First of all, They can be available hot places where are not many crowed.

>> First of all, they can be available in hot places where it isn\'t crowded.

It’s very common to work on weekdays.

>> CORRECT!

So the people who could be there will be in the office.

>> CORRECT!
Secondly, They can save money because some places provide a weekdays promotion which they can use the place with a cheaper price.

>> Secondly, they can save money because some places provide a weekday-promotion wherein they can use the place with a cheaper price.

OR >> place with a cheaper price.

>> Secondly, they can save money because some places provide a weekday-promotion wherein they can use the place in an affordable price.

Finally, Also they can avoid rush-hour.

>> Finally, they can also avoid the rush-hour.

OR >> Lastly, they can avoid the rush-hours.

I think it’s time saving and more comfortable.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think it saves time and is more convenient.

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