What are the possible benefits of working on weekends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there is no benefit of working on weekends. Relaxing in weekends make us work hard in weekdays, so it must be a vacation for people.
Also, even if you can earn more money than before, but it is too harm to your health. Therefore, I don\'t recommend to work on weekends.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for answering your home work! ^^
I agree with you that weekends are meant to be spent with family and leisure activities, giving us energy to work during the week.
Hope you always enjoy your weekends~
-Jhozel :)
>>I think there is no benefit to working on weekends.
Relaxing in weekends make us work hard in weekdays, so it must be a vacation for people.
>>Relaxing on weekends makes us work hard on weekdays, so it must be a vacation for people.
Also, even if you can earn more money than before, but it is too harm to your health.
Also, even if you can earn more money than before, but it is too harm to your health.
>>Also, even if you can earn more money than before, it is still harmful to your health.
Therefore, I don\'t recommend to work on weekends.
>>Correct
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