What are the possible benefits of working weekend?
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Dear [Name],
Yesterday I was ver tired for fixing scale house of my elder brother.
In case of Korea, if I work in weekend or holiday, I will take a diuble pay for day. But theseday, most of person don\'t want to do work in holiday. Because of private time or personal leisure.
As I said, my job is salesman. So I had no chance to get this money like a holiday pay. Most of case job are manufacture or office workers. My job is very free for working time. And I will be received more money as a incentive of achiving sales target every year.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Yesterday I was ver tired for fixing scale house of my elder brother.
In case of Korea, if I work in weekend or holiday, I will take a diuble pay for day.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Yesterday I was ver tired for fixing scale house of my elder brother.
>>Yesterday, I was very tired of fixing the scale house of my elder brother.
In case of Korea, if I work in weekend or holiday, I will take a diuble pay for day.
>> In the case of Korea, if I work on the weekend or holidays, I will have a double pay for that day.
But theseday, most of person don\'t want to do work in holiday.
>> But these days, most people don\'t want to work on a holiday.
Because of private time or personal leisure.
>> CORRECT!
As I said, my job is salesman.
>> As I said, I am a salesman.
So I had no chance to get this money like a holiday pay.
>> So, I had no chance to get holiday pay.
Most of case job are manufacture or office workers.
>> The most common jobs here are manufacture or office workers.
My job is very free for working time.
>> I have a lot of free time at my job.
And I will be received more money as a incentive of achiving sales target every year.
>> And I will receive more money as an incentive for achieving sales targets every year.
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