What are the pros and cons of backpacking?
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Backpacking is a form of low-cost and independent travel.
There are a lot of positive sights of backpacking.
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First, boost social skills.
>> First, it boosts social skills.
We can have many chances to meet new travelers came from various countries, and everybody might have time to need someone\'s help.
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Travelers have same interests and have similar issues that might happen during their journey.
>> Travelers have the same interests and similar issues might happen during their journey.
So, it is easy to communicate each others.
>> So, it is easy to communicate with one another.
Second, we can stay any hotels, inns and accommodations.
>> Second, we can stay at any hotels, inns and accommodations.
Third, we can fully experience the places that we visit.
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Backpackers usually stay one city for a long time and spend their time to lie down in the park instead they visit hot tourist spots and take a photo of them with landmark in it\'s city.
>> Backpackers usually stay in one city for a long time. They spend their time to roam around at the park instead of visiting the famous tourist spots and take a photo of them with the landmarks in the city.
The negative one is thing that travelers can be easily exhausted because they have to bring all the things in their backpack and they need to use public transportation or have to walk.
>> The first negative thing about backpacking is that travelers can be easily exhausted because they have to bring all the things in their backpack and they need to use public transportation or walk.
Second, they don\'t usually have enough money to spend, so they have to prepare all the information before leaving.
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