What are the pros and cons of being a celebrity?
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What are the pros and cons of being a celebrity?
I do not want to be a celebrity because I prefer to be alone during my free time. It would be very tiresome if every person pay attention to me. However, I will be able to earn money easily I guess.
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I do not want to be a celebrity because I prefer to be alone during my free time.
>> correct!
It would be very tiresome if every person pay attention to me.
>>It would be very tiresome if every person pays attention. to me.
However, I will be able to earn money easily I guess.
>> correct!
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